Bristol -- a story project

[Samuel Edwards]

Hey fellas,

   I've been working on a story.  It's not directly related to space or anything just sort of something I've been toying around with.  I finished the first chapter the other day and made it a .pdf file.  SolarLiner suggested I post it here because you all might like something to read.

It follows a more personal type storyline.  If I had to place it in a genre it would be along the lines of a comedy. 

https://www.dropbox.com/s/wn6l0fbh8dtimts/Bristol%20Linda%20Clarke-Chapter%201.pdf

I attached a link to a .pdf file as it would be more acceptable than posting 2,000 words in a post.

Comments and criticism always appreciated.

 

Jamie.

[antoo]

It looks good, but I'm not an English story reader. I only read Scientific books.

But I think it's a good start!

[Samuel Edwards]

Thanks!  :D