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Author Topic: Bristol -- a story project  (Read 1490 times)

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Offline Samuel Edwards

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17 January 2014, 18:04:39
Hey fellas,

   I've been working on a story.  It's not directly related to space or anything just sort of something I've been toying around with.  I finished the first chapter the other day and made it a .pdf file.  SolarLiner suggested I post it here because you all might like something to read.

It follows a more personal type storyline.  If I had to place it in a genre it would be along the lines of a comedy. 

https://www.dropbox.com/s/wn6l0fbh8dtimts/Bristol%20Linda%20Clarke-Chapter%201.pdf

I attached a link to a .pdf file as it would be more acceptable than posting 2,000 words in a post.

Comments and criticism always appreciated.

 :beer:

Jamie.


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Reply #1 - 17 January 2014, 20:11:34
It looks good, but I'm not an English story reader. I only read Scientific books.

But I think it's a good start!

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Reply #2 - 18 January 2014, 20:05:21
Thanks!  :D

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