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Orbiter English => Orbiter English => Topic started by: Samuel Edwards on 17 January 2014, 18:04:39
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Hey fellas,
I've been working on a story. It's not directly related to space or anything just sort of something I've been toying around with. I finished the first chapter the other day and made it a .pdf file. SolarLiner suggested I post it here because you all might like something to read.
It follows a more personal type storyline. If I had to place it in a genre it would be along the lines of a comedy.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/wn6l0fbh8dtimts/Bristol%20Linda%20Clarke-Chapter%201.pdf
I attached a link to a .pdf file as it would be more acceptable than posting 2,000 words in a post.
Comments and criticism always appreciated.
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Jamie.
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It looks good, but I'm not an English story reader. I only read Scientific books.
But I think it's a good start!
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Thanks! :D